5 Reasons Why Readers Won’t Buy Your Book.

1.  They don’t know about your book.

This seems painfully obvious, doesn’t it?

With the rise of e-readers, the decline of shelf-space, and the sheer overload of information, getting noticed by a target audience is a lot like shouting your title randomly at a Rolling Stones concert.

Consequently, it’s more important than ever to promote.  As Cory Doctorow said, “My problem isn’t piracy, it’s obscurity.”  (I love that quote, btw, even though I think he was referring to free reads on Amazon.)  You need to get the word out.

Possible solutions:  a well-planned launch… with plenty of time to lay down the ground work.

2. They don’t know what your book is about.

Think about how you buy a book at a bookstore.

You’re attracted by the cover.  You pick it up.  Then you flip the damned thing over, read the back cover, then crack it open and read the first few pages.

If you’re an e-reader, then you usually stumble across a title… and do the same thing, essentially.  You’re going to check out the cover.  You’re going to read the blurb. Then you’re going to read an excerpt, or a download a sample if one’s available.

This is where knowing your hook and your high concept is really, really helpful.  You might have about ten seconds to catch a reader’s eye.  Throat-clearing and “well, it’s about a girl, and she’s been…” will result in one quick click away.

Possible solutions:  make sure you’ve got a hell of a blurb; an excerpt on your book page; a sample on buy sites; an excerpt for digital distribution.

3.  They don’t know if they’re going to like it.

Why do bestsellers stay bestsellers?  Because in a lot of cases, they’ve earned it.  They’re a proven commodity.

It’s not merely a case of “oh, readers are unadventurous sheep who only want the same pap delivered in slightly different packaging.”  It’s “readers have been screwed and seen money go down the drain for wall-bangers.”

Right now, they want authors they can trust or a near-guarantee that they’re going to enjoy it.  How are they going to figure this out?

The sample or excerpt will go a long way towards easing that, but possibly even more important:  social proof.  That can come in a variety of forms:  cover quotes are huge. Reviews, either industry, book blogs or reader reviews on buy sites, are also influential.

Also, I would not overlook the promotional potential of libraries. I disagree with authors who want libraries to give royalties to authors.  First, I’ve worked in libraries and spent years there: budgets are tight, and I think if they paid royalties every time a book was checked out, in our economy, libraries would vanish.

Second, libraries are one of the best sources of promo out there.  Yes, there are readers who either cannot afford your book, or simply will not shell out the cash to buy your book (or any other book.)

You know what?  You’re not losing the sale, because they wouldn’t have bought it no matter what.  However, there’s a third library patron: the one who doesn’t want to spend the money because, again, doesn’t know whether she’ll like it.

So she reads it. And loves it.  And gets a late fee, because she doesn’t really want to give it back.  Next thing you know — she goes out and buys it.  And if you can hook her on a series from a library read?  I speak from experience: there is nothing as frustrating as waiting to borrow a series in order. A true fiction addict, once hooked, will go out and clear out your back list as soon as budget permits.

Possible solutions:  cover quotes from authors readers recognize; reviews and more reviews; and free reads and library copies don’t hurt.  Especially for the first in a series.

4.  They don’t know who you are.

I recently read a blog that said that readers don’t simply want to read books anymore: they want a relationship with the author.  “You are your brand” is becoming a bit more than a tired platitude as readers make buying decisions by not only checking out reviews and buy sites but your web presence, either on your site or on social media like Facebook and Twitter.  If you want to live like an online recluse, your book had better be frickin’ mind-blowing.

Possible solutions:  a thoughtful, authentic and accessible presence, online and possibly through speaking engagements/radio/face time.  A frickin’ mind-blowing book also helps. 🙂

4b. Corollary: they know who you are, and you’re bugging the crap out of them.

There are some authors who, in a fit of desperation born of knowing the previous four steps, lose their damned minds and consequently promote as if their lives depended on it. Every tweet, every post, the eight billion yahoo groups they belong to, the forums, the blogs they comment on…all get papered with the promotion equivalent of shrapnel as they try to ensure that people know about their book.

They’re trying to jump start word-of-mouth, but all they’re doing is convincing Those That Generate WOM that they’re desperate and irritating.

When you’re “your brand,” suddenly your book carries with it the mark of Cain: it could be the next Harry Potter, but nobody wants to crack it open because frankly, they don’t want to give you the sale.

Possible solutions:  the “friend test.”  For whatever promo you put out, think about it as if you’re telling your best friend…. one you wouldn’t feel awkward about telling that you’ve got a book out.  Someone you know would love the book, and wants to buy it.  Asking once is a reminder — hey, I’ve got this book out!  Twice, if she’s forgetful.  Nine times?  Now you’re nagging.

Or imagine if you, as a reader, were hearing what you’re about to be sending out. Yes, repetition is important — but if you got the same message, with no other benefit or information or “cookie” for the reader, five times a day every day, wouldn’t you start to get a little pissed off?  Wouldn’t your cursor hover over the “unfriend” box?

Other solution:  moderation.  Everything in moderation.

5.  They are not the Right Reader for your book.

Again: you’ve got the next Harry Potter, let’s say.  There will still be a bunch of people out there who will simply not buy your book.  They may have read the title, the blurb, downloaded the sample, saw the reviews on Amazon, discussed it with enthusiastic friends who say ohmygod have you read this yet you absolutely MUST!

But they’re still not gonna buy.

Maybe because they don’t have the money.  Maybe because they just can’t seem to connect with the concept. Whatever.  They’re just not your Reader.

Possible solutions:  know who your Right Reader is — and let it go.  You can’t sell them all.  Good news?  You don’t need to.

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16 Replies to “5 Reasons Why Readers Won’t Buy Your Book.”

  1. A very nice post, which touches on all the issues writers with a first book (traditional, indie or e-pubbed)face. I think No. 4 is especially true. I got an e-mail from a reader who said she NEVER reads debut authors but made an exception because she saw a mention of my book in the newspaper. I’m sure she’s not the only reader out there who follows that unspoken rule. Reaching them is a major hurdle we have to clear.

    1. Glad you liked the post, Todd. And congrats on the book! Reaching readers, especially as debut authors, is tough but not impossible.

      Great website, too, by the way — ordinarily I’m not a fan of flash sites, but you’ve got good visuals. 🙂

  2. In my case, it could be that my enemies are plotting against me and keeping my book sales depressed. That’s my theory. They’re everywhere, and they hate me almost as much as an ex-wife.

    That’s a whole ‘nother blog, though…

  3. Thanks Cathy, you shouldn’t have. It was so nice of you to write this just for me. What’s that? Oh, there are others? 😉

    But seriously, I feel like every point is one I need to etch onto my ‘Get this through your numb skull, and start working on it’ list (with the possible exception of 4b–which made me lol–as I probably lean more toward the online recluse than the bugger).

    For the moment, I need to reach for ‘make sure the book is frigginn’ mind-blowing,’ or as close as I can get–which is what I should be doing right now. Thanks again, though. This is great stuff. It’s all laid out before me. I have but to strive.

    1. Well, there is ONE other reason: they don’t buy your book because it isn’t done! 😀

      Don’t worry — I’m lumping myself in that one. Gotta get these revisions done, LOL.

  4. Very interesting! And while my first novel is still selling, thanks to the new digital world, launching a book today isn’t the same as it was just a few years ago. I got so many requests for autographs, people ordered the “Real Women Wear Red” t-shirt, signed up for newsletters, etc. for that book. The second book, well, “Hello? Is anybody out there?” lol! I loved how you compared it to shouting your book title at a Rolling Stones Concert! It seems these days that it’s not just us shouting our book title at the concert, it’s that everybody at the concert also has a book and is shouting out their title. So I’m a bit overwhelmed thinking about releasing my next book… nice post – I tweeted it.

    1. Thanks, Kathy. That’s why when I talk about promotion, I think the best game plan is to get out of the concert, as it were… stop yelling when and where everyone else is. Move it to small gatherings, with people who actually ask “do you have a book coming out?” Get into the reader communities. Work the small rooms.

      The only thing is, I see so many people who are used to “shouting at the concert” that when they get to a living room and someone asks “so what’s your book about?” they start yelling “I HAVE THIS BOOK ABOUT FAIRIES!!!”


  5. Great post! I have one thing to add, though…another reason readers won’t buy your book, or even try it if it’s free: You were sloppy. You didn’t take as much care with an e-book as you would a print book.

    I read a cover blurb on a free Amazon book just yesterday. The heroine’s name was spelled 2 different ways throughout the blurb…at least 3 times each way. I spent more time trying to decide what her real name was then reading the blurb. And then refused to download the book (even though it was FREE!) because I figured if the blurb was sloppy, the book was sloppy. I have no desire to waste my time trying to decipher half the book or get jerked out of the story over and over again because of nonexistent copy editing.

    Maybe that’s just me. But I’m betting not.

    1. That is a train wreck. When your heroine’s name is misspelled multiple times in the blurb you know that the book itself is probably going to be a mess… or at least that’s the assumption. Oy. Whatever else can be said about the Big 6, their sales department is usually a bit more “on it” than that. (Not always, but they know their $$ depends on it, so they tend to be sharper on the sales side.)

  6. I hopped over here from Writer Unboxed today. The title of your post caught my eye as I was scanning through the responses to “Shhh the girls in the basement are sleeping.”

    Very much enjoyed your post. I’m finishing up the final draft of my novel and the points you make are helpful. I was wondering if I could print out your post and use it in my writing group? As a reference only with due credit to you.

  7. Great post, Cathy!
    I agree with you about libraries. That is where I get most of the books I read. As an avid reader and library patron, I feel I’ve helped a lot of authors by sending the library “purchase requests” for new books. (Many which I have read about at Writer Unboxed, where I saw your link.) They’ve bought every one.

    1. I love libraries, for so many reasons. I think you’ve helped a lot of authors, as well — both in the purchase request sale, AND in helping new readers find their books!

  8. Great post. My favorite “blurb” story is….

    At a writers conference years ago, one of the writers who had been presenting was selling his books. I picked up one and looked at the blurbs on the back….hmmm…then I checked the bio on the conference info. The author published under several pseudonyms and had used them to blurb himself. So cheesy and hilarious. When I read his book I understood why he had been forced to do that. haha!

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